iLoveShortFilms.com Review:
This is a nice first attempt at a comedy. The characters slightly remind me of the two northerners from Lock Stock and Two Smoking Barrels.
The cinematography on the other hand needs some work. i understand you only had a short time to film and this dose lead to having to compromise but a quick tip for next time about setting up your shots.
Firstly the composition is not to bad there are some nicely set up shots in there but some scenes are suffering from lack of light.
In the car scene, one of your actors are nicely lit with some nice contrast on the face, but the other not lit so well. You may find it beneficial to really start concentrating on getting every scene consistently lit, especially when it comes to lighting the reverse shot of a conversation.
So in conclusion this is a good effort and the Director Aden Barwick shows some promise as a film maker but if you could tighten up on a few things you will be on your way, even on a budget by spending that extra time setting up the shot you will start to see some great results. Nice job and we look forward to the next one.
This is a nice first attempt at a comedy. The characters slightly remind me of the two northerners from Lock Stock and Two Smoking Barrels.
The cinematography on the other hand needs some work. i understand you only had a short time to film and this dose lead to having to compromise but a quick tip for next time about setting up your shots.
Firstly the composition is not to bad there are some nicely set up shots in there but some scenes are suffering from lack of light.
In the car scene, one of your actors are nicely lit with some nice contrast on the face, but the other not lit so well. You may find it beneficial to really start concentrating on getting every scene consistently lit, especially when it comes to lighting the reverse shot of a conversation.
So in conclusion this is a good effort and the Director Aden Barwick shows some promise as a film maker but if you could tighten up on a few things you will be on your way, even on a budget by spending that extra time setting up the shot you will start to see some great results. Nice job and we look forward to the next one.